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Ari's wonderland by DreamingDoe Ari's wonderland by DreamingDoe
I . finnished. this. AT LAST!!!!!!!!!

ok so. she's my new OC, ari <3 the style is inspired by jun moshizuki's padora hearts : D
i had used what?.. 274 layers? yeah, thet was it.. xD

the lineart:
i faild the color i am really uppset about it.Emoji18  


still, this is the best i've done so it'll have to do xD

PLEASE CRITIQUE!!!!
Thank you <3


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Rest of art: me!
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:icondemiangle23:
i love the color and the drawing itself its very unique.
the contrast of the colors with her and her surroundings is spectacular.
over all i give a 100 to the fullest and really really hope i get to see more like it.
keep up on the awesome work best drawing of the day and cant wait for whats next
oh yeah and the name of the drawings so cute it matches the picture perfectly most of all. the shading was good as well and is the best ive seen all day so happy i could help if i helped and really caint wait forthe next one
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Well The first critique is, as nice as it was, not very helpful.

Let me start. The pic does look pretty nice Overall but there are many flaws. You made a nice prespective, but the shading isn't deep enough. The stuffed animals are in the Background and as it can be seen on the wall it's very dark there. The animals should be alot darker. More shadowed. Also the gray one loks too stiff. I guess you tried to make it look like it's leaning on the wall but i really just Looks like it's staniding all crippled. Try looking up some sitting stuffed animals. Youll see what happens to the perspective and stuff.
Also you still need to work on your anatomy. I suggest to draw poses from photos or visit sides such as posemaniac.
The Folds don't look very natural either. But i think the only way to learn those is by observing People and their clothes.

The originality...Well i wish i could say it's original. But it Looks too much like a "welcome to my crooked world" by a certani Artist you know very well. You gave the bunny a scissor just lie she did too. And Overall it's just the same concept as she did.

The technique is nice though. Shading has soft spots but also cell shaded parts kinda and i think that's a nice combination. You could probably work out your own style if you'd work out that technique.

And i don't really know what "Impact" means... maybe the Impact on the eye or somethig haha
Would be moreor less the same as The Vision though. So i'll just stop here.

Hope you can handle critique...
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TheBrokenKnight Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2013
Superb work!! It looks incredible!!!
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:icondreamingdoe:
DreamingDoe Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2013
OMG THANK YOU SO MUCH!!!! :iconcraiplz:
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:iconthebrokenknight:
TheBrokenKnight Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2013
You're very welcome!! :hug:
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barbiero Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
<font><font>me encanta, hermoso dibujo </font></font>
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DreamingDoe Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2013
grazias!!!! :iconyuihugplz:
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barbiero Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
<font><font>de nada</font></font>
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xXPaintedDreamXx Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
So amazing. ~:heart:
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:icondreamingdoe:
DreamingDoe Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2013
oh my, thank you :heart:
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Toflun Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Nice Nami! ^^
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DreamingDoe Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2013
Thankies ^^
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Toflun Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You're welcome! ^^
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GoodKittyNyanchan Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:iconhontoplz: OMG!  I would love to wear her outfit-nyaaa. :heart: :iconazu-nyanplz:
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:icondreamingdoe:
DreamingDoe Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2013
Nyaawww thankies! Nyes, me to! :iconyeashplz:
Nyu are so kind, nyaa :iconazu-nyanplz:
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Yukimi99 Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2013  Student Digital Artist
J'ADOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:iconkonikospinplz:
C TROOOOP BOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!:iconifaintplz::iconsobeautifulplz::heart:Spread More Love Emote - PLZ
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DreamingDoe Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2013
Merci, mais t la seule a le penser xD
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:iconyukimi99:
Yukimi99 Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Mais tu viens juste de le mettre potate^w^
(met le dans des groupes!!!!! o_o)
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:icondreamingdoe:
DreamingDoe Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2013
C deja fait! Nn mais ho!  patate toi même!>o<
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Yukimi99 Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Bien!:icongreatjobplz:
Mais potate c affectueux:iconsmile-luplz:
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:icondreamingdoe:
DreamingDoe Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2013
A ouais? Ok bah toi t'es.... Citrouille xD nan je decone
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Yukimi99 Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2013  Student Digital Artist
j'préfère  Kiwi xD
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DreamingDoe Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2013
w.. WHAT?!
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